Hi you have an amazing piece of writing.It is powerful,super and strong writing.My favourite part of your story was when you said the sun was bursting with energy.Maybe next time you should put your full stops in the write place.Because in your writing it says after i was diving through the hose it was.I still like your writing it reminds me of looking at my cousin when he was getting knocked out
Hi you have an amazing piece of writing.It is powerful,super and strong writing.My favourite part of your story was when you said the sun was bursting with energy.Maybe next time you should put your full stops in the write place.Because in your writing it says after i was diving through the hose it was.I still like your writing it reminds me of looking at my cousin when he was getting knocked out
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