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Monday, 30 May 2016

My birthday poem

Hi this is a poem that I created.It is about my birthday and what I do on my birthday.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Marshal, WOW! What are great poem you wrote about your birthday. I loved reading it. I loved how you used rhyming words in your poem to make it more interesting for the reader. I also loved how you used adjectives like: Pleasant, laugh, happy. I look forward to reading more of your poems. Please make sure that you also include the WALT next time. Keep up the fantastic work in class. :)

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